I caught a
Fleeting glimpse of your
Eyes as you rushed from the room,
Leaving me empty, full of longing and wanting you.
Too late! You were gone
And
Now
I was alone.
Maybe there was still a chance.
Perhaps you waited in the corridor, or in another
Room. I looked. I hunted. Opened
Every door,
Sought you
Shouted for you.
If only you had … If
Only I hadn’t called you Nancy, instead of
Neville, then I felt I would have made a better impression.
21 comments:
Interesting stuff.
fantastic! a clever take on the (dual) theme - definitely left an impression on me!!
it's thursday there already!!! still wednesday here!
great photo and interesting take on a difficult theme--niiice!
happy tt-c
haha. yeah getting the name wrong will do that every time. happy tt!
Oh yea...wrong name...bad, bad mistake..
I love the intertwined story done this way. Very creative, Neville! err...I mean Nancy...err I mean Betty...
"Nancy instead of Neville..." that is hilarious!
btw, my word verification is: comic
how appropriate.
How do you confuse a Neville for a Nancy?
Neville indeed. I like this post.
um...interesting love life you have there! :)
I'd nearly given up on what to post. Who'd a thought that having 2 themes would make it more difficult to come up with something?
Thanks for the kind comments, I had fun writing it.
Wings & Tom - that's on a strictly nedd-to-know basis :D
Nedd to know?
It's late. G'night!
Oh dear, nothing like a little gender confusion to make an impression.
This is so clever. The ending really made me smile :)
Great work. Happy TT
oops! getting the name wrong certainly leaves an impression.
haha, funny
and clever
and a great photo
That's a great acrostic poem. Nicely done.
What a clever and meaningful haiku!
witty
and pretty
post!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/08/choose-a-healthy-boundary-over-emotional-withdrawal/
here is mine!
Happy Sunday!
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